fluffy said:

I would like any suggestions for this book since I am using it as a way of teaching the writing process to my third grade class.

Neal said:

Aw, Fluffy. I hope the day turns around for you.

Neal said:

Would you like suggestions for the story, or for spelling and grammar, or layout, or everything?

fluffy said:

Any suggestion would be great. So far my students are loving what I have, but they are only in the drafting stage of theirs and I am trying to stay a step ahead of them.

Neal said:

Well I guess my biggest suggestion would just be to keep going! I love the story so far but it seems like it needs an ending. Fluffy has to have something go right for her, something to break her streak of bad luck. Any other suggestions out there?

Adriana said:

who would want a morning like that? NO ONE! ha ha ha ha

BrookeH said:

i love your book fluffy i hope your day gets better you rock

BrookeH said:

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha i love your book

CourtneyK said:

This a great book. You are a great arthur.

BrooklynH said:

Good gob

BrookeH said:

hi this is fuffy adrieana thans for the comment i'm on a friends name

BrooklynH said:

I love your book

CourtneyK said:

Fluffy is having a horribel morning.I would not want to be her.

CourtneyK said:

A suggestions you could have is more detail.

dscoh said:

It reminds me of Alexander and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day.

bunnygirl said:

This is a good book and it also has good pictures.

curtis1567 said:

I like your book! Haha, I wouldn't want to suffer a day like that!

paulagstar said:

I liked the way u said stuff that might happen to u too make a realy bad day.

Lpswift said:

Smooth moves!

baymay said:

I'm glad I've never had a day like that!!!!!! But it waas a good book!!!

nhorsey said:

it was awesome and the illistrations rocked : D

nhorsey said:

Great story i love the illustration of the front cover! The story was so funny!! ^ _ ^